My Heart.

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Eponine (If you find a rare Gem, hold it tightly!) on Wednesday, 29-Jun-2005 17:40:42

Can I really trust you,
With my fragile heart,
Will you be another,
To break it all apart.
And, do I take the chance,
And let you look inside,
Or do I lock away,
All the feelings that I hide.

All the things you say,
I pray that they are true,
For this I'll need to know,
If I give my heart to you.
Will you be there if I laugh,
And, Be there if I cry,
Will you always share with me,
The worst and best of times.
Will you be there if I rise,
Will you be there if I fall,
In happiness and darkness,
Will you see me through it all.

For if you answer yes,
To these questions that I ask,
You'll have all this as well and more,
And a love to always last.

Post 2 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Wednesday, 29-Jun-2005 17:47:28

Very goood, Bridgie! That's how I feel!

Post 3 by Eponine (If you find a rare Gem, hold it tightly!) on Wednesday, 29-Jun-2005 17:53:07

I know Melmel Me too. Smile. Maybe we'll both find out?

Post 4 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Wednesday, 29-Jun-2005 18:14:18

Maybe,...

Post 5 by Blair (Generic Zoner) on Wednesday, 29-Jun-2005 18:57:55

did you ever found out?

Post 6 by louiano (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Wednesday, 29-Jun-2005 21:36:13

haha. Well I liked the writing.

Post 7 by season (the invisible soul) on Thursday, 30-Jun-2005 0:15:19

sis, very good one.

Post 8 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Thursday, 30-Jun-2005 11:18:11

I love the tentative honesy very good...smile

Post 9 by Miss Gorgeous (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Saturday, 02-Jul-2005 10:07:20

wow, that was really good. you really got there the true definition of love. its really good specially when you feel it too.

Post 10 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 05-Jul-2005 4:12:49

Bridgette, I love this poem. I could imagine it on a song or something like that. It's great.

Post 11 by Eponine (If you find a rare Gem, hold it tightly!) on Tuesday, 05-Jul-2005 9:11:15

Hey Ines, maybe I'll do that, and Ruthie, No. I'm glad you all enjoyed it though. When I feel something deeply, I write about it. It's easier than saying it outright.

Post 12 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 05-Jul-2005 15:31:24

That's true sis.